Thorial, The Guardian of the Breach (Champion Concept)
This is a character I made up for a story (which is why there are words and terms that make no sense in LoL's mythology) and decided to try and turn into a champion for League. If you couldn't already tell, I'm much more of a writer than an artist, but I felt I needed to draw some kind of picture to give a reference. In any sense, here’s my concept page for Thorial, the Guardian of the Breach. Please critique anything you feel needs it.
http://img09.deviantart.net/1163/i/2015/173/d/8/thorial_qauhsiamohc_by_nine_cence-d8yc6w7.jpg
-- Roles & Stats --
Primary Role: Mage
Secondary Role: Fighter
Resource Bar: Mana
Health: 530 (+75)
Health Regeneration: 3.85 (+.55)
Mana: 330 (+50)
Mana Regeneration: 4.36 (+.8)
Attack Damage: 53.5 (+2.8)
Attack Speed: 636 (+.09)
Armor: 23 (+3)
Magic Resistance: 30 (+1.25)
Movement Speed: 355
Range: 525
-- Abilities --
Passive Ability: Raze of the Breach / Whither Edge
Description: Thorial's basic attack is tied to its weapon Raze. As such, Raze can attack enemies (which counts as Thorial's auto attack) within a set range (525 units) while Thorial casts abilities. Targeting another enemy will redirect Raze. Activating W interrupts Raze and, upon completion, will require Thorial to retarget an enemy.
Description: Whenever Thorial's basic attacks hit an enemy (excluding Minions), it places Breach Grasp on them. When a marked enemy is struck with one of Thorial's abilities, Breach Grasp is consumed, the alternate effect is applied, and Whither Edge goes on cooldown for 1 second per character level.
First Ability (Q): Trir Bomb
Range: 800
Cooldown: 10 / 9 / 8 / 7 / 6
Cost: 70 / 80 / 90 / 100 / 110 Mana
Description: Thorial creates a ball of concentrated energy and forces it to explode, damaging and throwing enemies back. Raze can also drain energy from struck enemies and restore Thorial's mana for a short time after.
Active: Thorial detonates a ball of energy 400 units wide in a targeted location, dealing 70 / 125 / 170 / 225 / 300 (+25% Ability Power) magic damage to and knocking up all enemies caught in the blast. All enemies hit have Breach Grasp (if applied) replaced with Draining Soul, which restores 1% per ability level of Thorial's mana with each basic attack for 3 seconds.
Second Ability (W): Debilitating Cleave
Range: 600
Cooldown: 10 / 9 / 8 / 7 / 6
Cost: 70 / 80 / 90 / 100 / 110 Mana
Description: Thorial spins Raze around itself, damaging and slowing all enemies hit. Raze can also deals more damage to struck enemies for a short time after.
Active: Thorial calls Raze to spin around it, dealing 50 / 75 / 100 / 125 / 150 (+40% Ability Power) physical damage to every enemy struck. All enemies hit have Breach Grasp (if applied) replaced with Bleeding Soul, which increases damage taken by enemies hit by Thorial's basic attack by 1% per ability level for 3 seconds.
Third Ability (E): Soulblaze
Range: 900
Cooldown: 10 / 9 / 8 / 7 / 6
Cost: 70 / 80 / 90 / 100 / 110 Mana
Description: Thorial shoots out a beam of flaming energy that tears through everything in its path. Raze can also set struck heroes ablaze, dealing damage for a short time after.
Active: Thorial fires a beam of energy in a target direction for 900 units, which travels through all obstacles and deals 85 / 130 / 175 / 220 / 265 (+25% Ability Power) magic damage to every enemy hit. Soulblaze deals reduced damage with each target it passes through (-25% per target, max reduction of 75%). All enemies struck have Breach Grasp (if applied) replaced by Burning Soul, which deals 2.5 points of damage per ability level over time to affected enemies for 5 seconds.
Ultimate Ability (R): Internecine Immolation
Range: 700
Cooldown: 120 / 100 / 80
Cost: 150 Mana
Description: Thorial's attacks now steal a portion of its enemies' soul and increases its power with each Soulstoln stack. Thorial can unleash this power at any time, consuming 50 Soulstoln and creating a field of energy that damages all enemies within it (including Thorial) at the cost of speed. If Thorial is killed by the field, it uses any remaining Soulstoln to revive itself quicker the next time it falls in combat.
Active: Thorial creates a field 700 units around it that deals true damage upon cast (+3 / 4 / 5 points of damage per stack of Soulstoln) and AP damage (+1.5 / 3 / 4.5 points of damage per stack of Soulstoln + 65% AP) every second to everything within the field, including Thorial, who is slowed by 50%. However, Thorial turns 25% of all damage done per second within the field (excluding damage done to himself) into health. This ability consumes 50 stacks of Soulstoln on cast and lasts for 4 / 5 / 6 seconds. It cannot be cast if Thorial has less than 50 stacks of Soulstoln. Internecine Immolation cannot be interrupted or canceled once cast unless upon death. Thorial can still move and cast abilities while Internecine Immolation is active, but it cannot regenerate mana. Any stacks of Soulstoln remaining upon Thorial's death (by Internecine Immolation exclusively) are turned into stacks of Deathless Sentinel, which remain indefinitely and are consumed upon death to reduce the time it takes Thorial to revive (-1 second per stack of Soulstoln).
Passive: Thorial generates 1 / 2 / 3 stacks of Soulstoln (max 100) every time it strikes an enemy with a basic attack or ability. If an enemy has Breach Grasp applied, Thorial gains double the stacks of Soulstoln per hit. Every 25 stacks of Soulstoln increases Thorial's base stats (excluding AP) by 5%. If Thorial is not in combat for 10 seconds, all stacks of Soulstoln are reduced to the lowest locked amount (e.g. if stacks of Soulstoln are ≤24, they are reduced to 0). Stacks of Soulstoln lock at 25, 50, and 75 stacks, and do not decrease unless consumed or removed upon death.
-- Background --
Gender: None
Race: Bithra / Golem
Birthplace: Areamous
Residence: Runeterra
Occupation: Guardian
Allied Faction: The Champions of Areamous
Enemy Faction: All Runeterra factions
Lore: A suit of divine armor granted life by a magical flame, Thorial of the Breach was brought to Runeterra alongside the rest of the Areamousian Champions on an investigation into a mysterious rift that formed in the center of Teyut. Armed with incredibly destructive powers and its sentient weapon, Raze, Thorial carries out the mission bestowed upon it by its creator with unwavering dedication and unstoppable force.
Friends: Lucian, Xerath
Rivals: Thresh, Garen
-- Quotes --
Upon Selection: "May destruction grant me power."
Upon starting a Match: "Raze shall mar this battlefield." "Slick the ground." "The Champions shall not be stopped."
Attacking: "I will bleed you to a husk." "Raze. Sic ‘em." "Your life will end by my will." "Countless before have fallen to me, what are you to them?" "Are you not in awe?" "Blood and soul, you are mine." "Raze is not yet full."
Movement: "Once more for Breach." "Onwards to the enemy." "As I walk through the valley, I am death."
Taunts: "If I had eyes then I would kill you with them closed." "Your soul is as sloppy as your fighting." "I doubt you are worth the effort."
Taunting Thresh: "Your lantern will be mine, and I will use it to show you who is stronger."
Taunting Mordekaiser: "My armor is better."
Taunting Garen: "Your justice is hopelessly flawed." " You fight for Demacia; I fight for the gods."
Taunting Xerath: "How far have you fallen that you would fight against me."
Using Breacher Thorial: "I may not have my armor, but that means little." "Raze's personification in my hand, you will fall all the same." "My strength returns with each bit of power."
Taunting Vi with Breacher Thorial: "Xzatowra! Without the sword..."
Taunting Riven with Breacher Thorial: "Xzatowra! Without the hair..."
Jokes: "No." "Your concept of humor has never made sense to me."
Using W on Thresh: "Your souls are now mine."
Using W on Vladimir: "And you think blood is powerful."
Purchasing an item: "More to the pile." "Strength for the strong."
Laugh: Monotone chuckle
Using Q: "Disperse."
Using W: "Enter the maelstrom."
Using E: "Gaze into my eyes and burn."
Using R: "Come all to death's fiery embrace."
Dying: "Xzaire return me."
Dying by R: "Timeless power cannot be silenced by a temporary death."
Slaying a Champion: "You grow my strength."
Slaying Garen: "Demacia, you tehl."
Slaying a Minion: "Persistent."
Destroying a Tower: "It's Teyut all over again."
Slaying a Neutral: "No such mercy."
Crit: "I grow stronger with every strike."
First Blood: "Bleed for Raze."
Match Start: "Purge the weak, drain the strong."
Player Team Wins: "The strong stand above all."
Player Team Loses: "Still so immature."
-- Animation --
Dance: https://www.youtube.com/v/jphHSGeU_C0?version=3&start=0&end=35&autoplay=1&hl=en_US&rel=0
Run: Thorial moves as if leaping forwards with each step as Raze floats beside.
Sprint: Thorial launches itself forwards, not even touching the ground.
Attack: Thorial stands idle as Raze swings independently.
Crit: Raze stabs directly at the target, causing a small explosion on impact.
Stance: Thorial stands with arms at its side and Raze floating next to it.
Idle: Thorial spins a small dagger around its right arm and through the air.
Taunt: Thorial raises its hand, causing Raze to fly into its grip, where it slams it on the ground with an explosion before releasing it.
Joke: Thorial shakes its head and crosses its arms.
Recall: Thorial raises its left arm and commands Raze to begin rapidly spinning in the air, cutting through time and space and opening a portal before Thorial, who lowers its arm and steps through.
Death: Thorial staggers backwards, clenching its fists before falling back, its energy vanishing from the armor as it collapses to the ground and scatters.
-- Skins --
Breacher Thorial: Thorial's armor and energy are replaced with flesh and bone, all that remains of its once great form is a broken helmet. The once mighty Raze is now replaced with a mockery of chain, leather and metal twisted together to resemble the great weapon. But the power still remains, and nothing will stop Thorial from reclaiming its power and once again bearing the title of the Guardian of the Breach.
-- Voice --
Rick Worthy
