The Shadow within the twilight
So after reading a story that I really enjoyed yesterday on here about Zed and Kayn I thought i'd make a story on Akali, this is my first time doing any sort of fan fiction, and it's been quite some time since I wrote any type of story that didn't involve DnD or Role play. So please be easy on the critics ^_^ but any good criticism is appreciated. Took me about thirty minutes to write this up and I hope some people will find some enjoyment in it.
_"mark acquired" the woman in green wrappings would whisper to herself _
Four men just below the tall Ioanian trees would be carrying along cargo. The containment of the cargo hidden within the large wooden crates that held them. For a brief moment the Kunochi in green silk would wonder to herself what would be worth risking their lives to smuggle from Ioanian to Noxus. weapon smugglers perhaps? She thought to hereslf. It mattered not, she was going to make this quick, she had other matters she had to attend to. But as the woman was ready to pull out her twin sickles and get to work that's when she heard it
_One of the men would come out from the large metal ship and ask "hey Erik, what should we do with the brats? Are we still taking them, or dumping them off somewhere else?" _
Taking a closer look the woman could see it now..the crates..they had holes in them...holes meant to give air...holes just large enough where someone could stick food rations through...not weapon traders..worse..slave smugglers. Clicking her tongue muttering something incoherent to herself she changed her mind on something. The plans she had for tonight..they could wait..she was going to enjoy this
_"God dammit Feris, I told you already, we are to keep them contained and fed till we reach Noxus, and those BRATS are going to make us a small fortune, so I suggest you keep each and every one of them alive, or else I swear in the name of all that is held sacred that it will be YOU that is dumped in the sea" _
_But just than as the two would argue about the state of their affairs, the woman would smirk to herself and see her chance to make them squirm. "Perfect" she whispered to herself, confused and stupid, the perfect requirements to make them squirm. Jumping down from the branch of the tree she stood on she would allow herself to free fall down, pulling from her pocket would be a special round ball no bigger than her palm. Tossing it towards the ground a odd illuminating twilight would radiate from the ground, completely concealing her image. As two men would take notice of the brief but subtle sound they would find themselves subdued. The first finding himself instantly taking down through a swift cut across his throat, the second would witness her in pure horror, seeing the image of the kunochi in green for just a moment, but just as fast as she had taken down his fellow seaman, she would vanish into the twilight of her shroud, in mere moments jumping onto him and taking him out with another fierce cut across his jugular. _
_The two men who were arguing outside of the ship would just stand their dumb founded, about a good 20 feet from the in cident, they would just stare at the weird twilight like dome that was before them..they had no clue what it was.. but it captured their allies..and all that could be heard within it was their brief but quick groans of agony. The woman stood still inside the dome..only a few seconds left before it wore out, looking at the two men she would smile under her mask, her fists gripping firmly onto her sickles. _
"what...what was that Erik..?" The man would ask, he thought about running..but did he even have a chance?
No..of course he didn't jumping from the twilight in the form of a shadow she would grapple herself onto the sailor known as Feris, screaming out she would sink her sickle straight through his skull, yanking it out as his blood would splash across the ground..leaving only one..the man frozen in his own fear known as Erik. He would mutter a single name..
_"Akali...the fist of Shadow..." _
_Akali would smile once more, enjoying how her name was a whispered horror story among pigs. Lowering the mask the woman would reveal herself..her beauty like a sick joke..as the blood of her previous victims was splashed across her flawless skin, her long raven black hair flowing across the sea side air as she would give a cold snicker, she would calmly say. _
"I suggest you run... I want to savor this."
#Q and A
So this is my short story on Akali and i titled it "the shadow in the twilight", been wanting to do something like this for quite a while, and this the rough draft that I just came up with. Personally I been wanting to post something on here for a while about Akali but was kinda scared of the criticism, however out of nowhere I just randomly told myself "Phantom just write it already" some people will probably have some questions so here is the Q and A.
Q: Why give the rough draft with the bad grammar and the alksdf;jasdf, why not just wait till you finished it? A: Honestly I was thinking of finishing it first than sharing it, but I figured if I did that, I would of chickened out and would of never wrote it at all, I figured if I just wrote it and posted it, well basically I forced myself to just DO IT. Now that the rough draft is shared with everyone this gives me little to no choice in my mind to finish it and do it right.
Q: Why Akali? A: honestly Akali to me is a champion who has so much potential to be something really cool, almost all her lore has been written by the fans through theories and fan fictions, and shes honestly a champion that riot has basically given to the people and said "here do whatever you want with her" be it lore, fan art, and so on, and that's pretty cool.
Q: Why are you making such a big deal out of this? it's just a post A: I suffer through really bad anxiety and self doubt, so sharing anything of mine is really nerve wracking ^_^
Anyways that's all, hope you all enjoyed it.