Looking for editors to help me write a fanfiction!

I'm not entirely sure that this is the right forum for this, but here goes... I'm writing a fanfiction about Ahri that's very character-and-developmentally focused, but I'm having trouble finding people who will consistently read it and give me feedback. I'm looking for this kind of feedback; what's boring? Is there something that seems out of place? Bad descriptions? Dull? I want, like, feedback about specific parts of the story and my writing. Am I being too descriptive? Not descriptive enough? Maybe there's a more clever way to incorporate something? What's your impression of the characters and plot thus far? etc.

If you're willing to read it and give me feedback like that consistently, please contact me! I will need your email address to share it (preferably gmail - it's on google docs), and it will not be posted anywhere until it is finished.

Basically the premise is that the League exists in the modern day and every game we play in League goes through them. it's set in the modern day, and while there's a lot of internal character conflict, I'd prefer to avoid any kind of super-mega-epic apocalyptic conflict, unless it pans out that that's what it needs. The plot, as I see it, will eventually involve the characters bringing about world peace (and possibly humanity becoming an intergalactic, spacefaring civilization). I also don't plan on putting anything of an erotic nature in there.