Strike a pose!

moves hands to lotion

for some reason it feels like a furry...

I always imagined Miss Fortune's hair would be like shiny, bouncy, luxurious, and laboriously put into perfect condition. Your excellent take on floofy-haired Sarah has introduced a new paradigm I wasn't even aware I was ready for.

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Pretty nice job!

If I could give helpful critique (as a budding artist myself), I would say the main problem with her face is that it is much too smooth. There are almost no angles whatsoever.

Sure, some people have very smooth faces, but there is no evidence of anything like cheekbones. There also isn't much depth to her face. Try adding in deeper shading in the future.

Again, nice job! The body is extraordinarily well formed. Keep it up :D

It seems like a much younger version of MF. The Face and the boob size just seems less mature and less GIGANTIC then they are now. But besides that it does seem to be a very nice drawing

Juicy

I think you just need to redo her mouth and nose for the face. They're kind of too simple for the style i think. Would be a very easy edit to try some other options.

edit: I ended up doing a correction on your image for some drawing practice for myself. A 'red line correction' of sorts on the face. Not trying to offend with unwanted help but if you would like to see it to see possible improvement options i can share. I will of course not share it if you are not interested.

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Then she shoots you. Ow.

I also like how the body came out ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Seriously though, love how 'floofy' the hair is. Looks really nice.

As someone with literally negative artistic talent I'd like to say this looks absolutely amazing! Her hair is definitely my favorite part! (pls teach me to draw pls thx)

really nice work

I dunno, I like the face pretty well

Can I get your artist name please?

Nice! :)