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[Champion Concept] Hyun-Tae, The Mysterious Warlord.

Elio X Oliver·9/20/2015, 7:11:48 PM·2 votes·816 views

Okay, to start this off. This is my first EVER champion concept, and for the champions kit I will not be posting any sort of numbers or scaling or anything because I just don't know how to do that xD. I do not have any sort of drawing because I suck at drawing lol (If anyone would want to draw one or something that would be cool :3).

Lore: Hyun-Tae was born to a family of Noxian spies living in a Demacian village as farmers. At around the age of 7, Hyun-Tae and his family fled to a nearby safe area because Noxus was planning an attack on this village. All Hyun-Tae can remember is awakening in the cave alone, with nothing besides a shimmering sword with rings on it. (His weapon is going to be a ring sword). Hyun-Tae joined the League in search of answers and vengeance.

[Kit] Passive- (One With The Blade) Upon damaging an enemy with an ABILITY, Hyun-Tae's sword will shimmer and he will randomly either -[Ignite] the enemy that was hit for a short time -[Slow] the enemy that was hit for a short time -[Blind] the enemy that was hit for a short time -[Stun] the enemy that was hit for a short time

Q- (Shimmering slice) Hyun-Tae slices his enemy with great force dealing damage. Upon striking an enemy champion, Hyun-Tae will receive a 3 second speed boost. (Most Damage)

W- (The lost one) (AOE) Hyun-Tae uses his ring sword to do an underhand slice to his enemy, knocking every enemy hit up. (Least Damage) (Utility/Knock-up)

E- (Momentum Slash) Hyun-Tae Slashes a target, dealing damage. The momentum from the first hit travels from enemy to enemy dealing less damage each time. (Similar to Katarina's Q)

R- (BLOOD SHED!!!!) ACTIVE: Hyun-Tae Targets an enemy champion, then throws his sword with a great force. This causes a bleeding/slow effect. PASSIVE: On a champion kill, gains permanent attack damage (half the amount per assist) This can only occur every 8 seconds.

Note: Let me know what you guys think. Yes, I know its not like super awesome but I tried and maybe someone with like it :3. Have a nice day!

[Edit 1] I updated Hyun-Tae's kit. Give it another look! :D

5 Comments

Lil Ghost9/20/2015, 7:14:48 PM2 votes

Very cool champion concept, would be cool if someone drew him

dogtierplayer9/20/2015, 7:44:02 PM2 votes

Will his Q be a cone? Also he has shitty mobility for an assassin. I would suggest working that his Q gives him movement speed for every unit hit. Minions would give less of a speed boost and is multiplicative for non-champions. For champions make it additive and with no cap. I would suggest 5% for every champion and 2.5% for minions with it lowering for each minion by .3%. I assume his W is an area of effect? If so it's a good move. I would suggest maybe his sword has a chain attached or a similar contraption for his R so that he could maybe pull people with his ult. Even with the Q buff I mention I still see him having a problem catching people since he has no movement options. If his R becomes a pull it should probably become a skill shot. So far he has very little cohesion between his moves. His passive is pretty terrible. It provides no immediate use to him at the start of the game and depends on him getting several kills to even be remotely useful. I would suggest putting that passive on one of his abilities and giving him a different innate. I like the concept but he is really underpowered so far. This is all my opinion of course I'm not a pro or anything.

Asperoth10/1/2015, 10:50:17 AM1 votes

Work on it man, develop some lore, and add up some pictures seems promising but it depends on your investment on the concept