Champ idea - Ayden

LoSeRnAmE23·10/1/2017, 9:19:45 PM·1 votes·288 views

I have been thinking to suggest this long time ago and I'm finally doing it. PS: This champ has totally random abilities and I really don't know what would be story for him.

P: .90 cal. Aydens pistol shoots seven bullets, each dealing 30% of his AD with attack speed locked at 2,8 (exclusive for this champion). When all bullets are fired, he reloads for 1.5 seconds, during this time he cannot use basic attack. If reload is interupted with usage of abiliry, reload will start from the beginnig. If Aydens current AD is 100 or less, bullets do true dmg to all targets. When his AD is higher than 100, bullets do physical dmg plus 30% of dmg dealt as true dmg. If attack speed is bought or gotten from other players or buffs, 10% of it will be placed for AD (like Jhin does).

Q: „Ma’ life saver“ Ayden places a shield which blocks all movement and projectiles that lasts for 4 seconds. 40% of damage from blocked projectiles is given to W and 10% to E, the effect is lost when one ability is used or after 10 seconds. Ayden can put the shield on himself too as a hemisphere, which will also block melee basic attacks and abilities and will only last for 2 seconds. It can only block knockups and knockbacks.

W: „Basically, a laser“ Ayden stops moving and charges his laser for 1.5 seconds, after charging, he shoots it in cursors direction dealing magic dmg plus 40% of blocked projectiles dmg over 3 seconds. The ability can be recasted to stop it. If the ability kills an enemy, 20% of spent energy is refounded.

E: Hand-to-hand Aydens basic attacks now become melee. With each punch he deals physical dmg plus 10% of blocked projectiles dmg over 10 seconds. His attack speed is reduced to 1.5. The ability can be recasted to stop it.

R: True power of the Will Ability can be cast only when Ayden is bellow 30% of his max HP or surrounded by 3 or more enemies. All Aydens abilities are buffed, leasting for 15 seconds in this mode, reducing the cooldown of the abilities by 50% and gains a shield for 5 seconds. Ayden does not reload during this time.

Buffed Q: Range of shield placement is now 50% bigger. It can be placed on allies, but it's still a hemisphere whether it's on Ayden or on an ally. Shield is now 50% wider when it's on ground. Dmg from blocked projectiles\melees is now adding 30% dmg to W and 8% to E as true dmg.

Buffed W: Ayden can now turn faster. Dmg is increased by 50% (does not count for blocked attacks bonus). Range is increased by 40%. Laser’s thickness is doubled.

Buffed E: Range of attacks is now 50% bigger. Dmg is increased by 30% (does not count for blocked attacks bonus). Punches damage enemies on the other side of targeted enemy. Every 5th punch knocks enemy airborne.

1 Comments

Lightwellian10/1/2017, 11:12:22 PM1 votes

Too limited. Little/no lore. No stated purpose or goal.

Who is Ayden? What lane are you trying to put him in? What does he do? (Lore) What does he do? (Game) Why are his guns so weak? Why does his R require him to be low?

Start with his background. Develop it thoroughly. Once it's done, decide what you're going to do with this champion. How will you express his design as a character? Which things are key to his identity as a person and as a champion? What will help him perform his role? Find these things, then solidify the design.

That is how you create a champion.