New champion, Shuratra, Will of the sands

Sauronseye12347·3/28/2016, 4:44:55 AM·2 votes·626 views

I recently had an idea for a fighter tank champion that is built to be played as a mid laner focused on high damage gap closers and high sustainability. His passive would be called Nomad where Shuratra leaves a trail of sand behind him that not only increases the movement speed of Allies in the trail but also synergies with all of his abilities, the sand left by his passive is permanent making his late game very strong, his Q is called entomb where Shuratra sucks an enemy or allied champion under ground dealing 90-120-150-180-250+60%AD and stunning them and making them I targetable for up to 4 seconds (Scaling with level.) this ability only works to enemy's or allies standing in the path o sand left by his passive. Shuratra's w is sandstorm, where shuratra surrounds himself with a sandstorm giving his a bonus 40-50-60-80-100 movement speed and dealing 20% of his AD to enemy units and champions around him for 10 seconds. His E blade of the sands created a massive sword made of sand behind him giving him an extra 100 attack range and dealing a bonus 60% of his AD as physical damage. His ultimate is called Maw of the sands, where shuratra creates a massive hole in the ground where the is enough sand to create one dealing 80-100-120% AD to enemies standing in the circle for up to 5 seconds, the damage is doubled to enemies submerged by his Q and his starting stats are 659 health and he does not use mana. Please give me an honest opinion of what you think of this champion idea and any changes I should make to his kit If riot does decide to at least think about adding him to the game, also his champion design would be similar to a mix between Garen and Azir and he would use a large 1 handed sword that would look slightly cracked and decayed

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psychocat7773/28/2016, 9:44:25 PM1 votes

Dereak the forbidden flame

Sauronseye123474/4/2016, 1:52:23 AM1 votes

Ok, so I've been looking over Shuratra's kit and realized it might be a bit OP with a 4 second stun and only AD ratios, and after Careful consideration i've decided to rework him. Ive completely changed his passive to instead of making his spells rely on it i've made it merely buff them slightly, i've removed the slow and made it only last about 1 minute before fading away His W is his main spell, Called Seal/Draw, Shuratra's desgin is centered around the massive sword in stabbed through his stomach, his W changes modes, similarly to Jayce's Hammer or Rek'sai's Burrow. When the sword is in his stomach, his Auto attacks become ranged and do less damage and all his abilities including his ultimate, even though both ults, while their effects are different they both share a cooldown. His Q while his sword is in his stomach is a weaker version of his old Q, the name is still Entomb but the stun is reduced to 1.5 seconds and the target is not made untargetable and this Q no longer synergizes with his ultimate, his Q while the sword is in Shuratra's stomach is called draw, Shuratra draws the sword Sealing his power His movement speed is increased, similar to his old W without scaling movement speed and dealing a fixed 20-40-80-120-160 damage per second around him for 6 seconds as long as the enemy minion or champion is within the sandstorm's range. His w when the sword is in his stomach is called Desert's Wrath, Shuratra launches a large skillshot at an enemy dealing 80-90-100% of his AP as magic damage and slowing by 70% for 2 seconds. His ultimate when the sword is sheathed is Maw of the sands, and is the exact same thing as his first ultimate, same scaling and same everything except now it has a base DPS of 120-160-200 magic damage plus the 120-130-140% AP scaling. When the sword is drawn His Q becomes Blade of the sands, similar to his first E a massive sword made of sand appears behind shuratra buffing his next 3 auto attacks, giving him 350 bonus range and doing 20-25-30-40-50% of his AD as bonus physical damage, his W when the sword is drawn is Seal, Shuratra Stabs the sword into his stomach making his auto attacks ranged and decreasing their damage, the active of seal is shuratra gains the Buff Sealed making his auto attacks slow by 65% for the next 15 seconds. His E when the sword is drawn throws the sword as a skillshot, if it hits an enemy it sticks into then similarly to a Kalista spear, on the next auto attack on a champion, he tears the sword out of an enemy, dealing a bonus 85-90-95-100-110% of his AD as bonus physical damage and slowing by 80%(I cant think of a name for this ability yet). His ultimate when the sword is drawn has a passive and an active, the passive gives him a bonus 40-60-80 AD when the sword is drawn and a bonus 40-60-80 AP when the sword is sheathed, the active, shuratra Slashes Upward sending out a massive tear in the ground dealing 140-160-200% AD on his and stunning for 3 seconds. That is the new Shuratra, Will of the sands, His lore is still in development but Riot, if you are even thinking about using this champion idea in the game, leave a comment in the comments section of this Board post with any ideas or changes to this champion or if youre going to use this idea as a champ in game, and anyone else feel free to give any recommendations or ideas you have for the champion in the comments section Bellow.