Champion Concept: None, The Prisoner of the White Room

IMarcus·7/27/2016, 3:23:23 AM·1 votes·436 views

First off, this isn't my actual account. My main is on Garena and the Garena forums sucks Alright, this is my first time doing this, and if you don't mind me saying this but I feel like this champion could be a good balanced juking hero with (IMO) Some pretty sick lore, comment your criticization and suggestions below before we get his looks and abilities down, I'd like to show you a niche little story that explains how this chara manages to get tied up in the events of Lol, despite being from another reality.

I...I honestly remember nothing anymore... Nothing about who I am Where I am And seemingly the most important thing, Why I'm here in this dreadful boring white room. It's been centuries, or maybe even just hours, yet I think i may start to be going insane. In this dull and clean white room, the only thing I have of note is but a simple chair, placed exactly in the center. oh? I seem to be seeing something rather interesting. Of all things that seems to take my attention, seems to be a "crack" of sorts. Floating in the air, three paces in front, and two paces to my left would be it's placement. I peer into it curiously and I find something amusing. There seems to be a war going in through this tiny peephole, great and terrifying beasts, and stalwart and brave soldiers. And odd man with a mask, and yet another masked man that's bigger than the last one. How exciting, I thought to myself, but then...the crack disappeared. Dispirited, I sank back into my chair, the despondant feeling of boredom sinking in again. A moment later I feel an oddity again. Looking behind me, I saw a crack like the last one, floating in the air as if the world was broken. Peering into the crack, I see another war taking place. Why such gruesome events? I wondered to myself. Not that it mattered to me at all as it did the job of entertaining me. This time I could see a girl fully clad in armor, having a duel against an odd...fishlike creature of sorts. Like a cross between a fish and a dwarf. Surprisingly the fish-thing was deftly playing around with the armored woman, and just as the thing managed to land a spear jab past the woman's guard, the window I saw from faded. Sensing another crack, I turned around to find a huge multitude of cracks. In each one there was a fight of sorts, a wolf man vs a fat man, a little girl fighting a giant knight, the same fish guy wearing different clothes this time and an odd rat-like being with a crossbow. It was a bit too much for this humble me until My eyes settled on one crack. There was nothing in it save for an odd platform of sorts. Odd, I thought as my hand reached for it, and delightfully my hand passed through. I thought for a few moments before I decided. Anything is better than this awful room of mine, and I rashly jumped through the crack...

Well I'm not the best of storytellers, hopefully the guys at riotgaming can make this better or something, as for the looks, it would be best described as an asylum convict of sorts. Wearing a straitjacked with the sleeves ripped apart, and having white cargo pants, as for his plain white hair and pale face, the most color you'll probably see is from the red colors of his pupils which is to say yes this character is an albino. the body structure could also be androdgynous and as for his voice, he'd sound like a curious and soft spoken british kid.

As for his abilities, all his abilities rely on these "cracks" He spawns around him, they are unseen to his enemies and only he and his allies can see it. His Passive:The Broken World-works like this. He has 15 "cracks" that spawn in range around him, they have a respawn rate of 3 seconds, and they don't move however if he gets out of range of a crack, another spawns immediately anywhere in his vincinity. as for the hidden bonus they give, standing near them gives the character a quicker recall as well as a different animation to support the quicker recall. And now let's get started with the actives however i'm planning to make him use something called "Stamina", Not Mana. It would work like this:He starts with an empty bar, the more he casts abilities, the more "tired" he gets, which if the bar reaches full he ends up reaching into his health as resources for his. The larger the amount of "exhaustion" he has to burn, the longer it'll take to recover, like say ten percent is longer than double of five percent full. I'll let Riot Games handle the math on this

Q-Reality Shift, this is where this character's juking play comes into effect. He blinks to a chosen crack(nearest if not selected) and dashes and deals minor damage to the nearest enemy. With no cooldown, and with the random placement of the cracks, it can make him a rather slippery enemy to catch, Although the spamming it could cause the exhaustion meter to fill up faster than you could expect.

W-World Shatter, this would be his combo started and main source of damage, the cooldown would be average, and the damage would be strong, but it would inflict the enemy stricked with a "Shatter" debuff that lowers their stats by not too much, but here's the cinch. Using you abilities off of that same target with the debuff give bonus percent damage to the spell AND they technically become a "crack" you can use your abilities off of.

E-Reset, this is the sort of "Shuffle Deck" ability this character needs, if his cracks were his playing cards. what this ability does is explode all of your cracks and instantly reset their placement, so if your cracks are spread to tightly, you can use this ability to "reshuffle" where your cracks are to a hopefully more preferable placement. The balancing factor would be that the damage is not that high and that it can damage you yourself.Also, this ability can be used on an enemy with a "shattered" debuff if they managed to get away with that tiny amount of health that's infuriatingly low.

R-The White Room, this is where Nobody rules as king, he creates moderately large area where in this area, his model changes to something a bit more "shadow wraithy"(think Noob Saibot in a way) and he gains a buff that provides an average buff to his stats and reducing his cooldown time for his other abilities by half. Other players including allies in this room also get the shattered debuff for as long as they stay in that area. Now for his interactions I plan for them to be quite comedic yet not reaching "wacky" levels. Something like his dance being him summoning his chair from a crack and drinking tea while teatime music plays XD. As for his recall animations, when not near a crack he summons a crack on the ground and falls back into base, as for if he's standing near a crack, he basically reaches for the crack and gets sucked in and landing back at the base. This is still my first concept, so please don't be too hard on me, and give me tips of balancing this hero if necessary :3

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