[Champion Concept] Electra "The Lost Chapter" [OC]

Slaylnc·10/14/2016, 10:23:16 PM·40 votes·4,431 views
[OC] Electra

https://cdna2.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/003/789/406/original/konstantinos-g-koukis-grakos-belt.gif?1477504314 https://cdna0.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/003/711/868/large/konstantinos-koukis-3lectra2.jpg?1476718289 My [OC] Electra took flesh and bones during the past 7 days. Rival project "in progress" Any suggestions/comments/critiques are welcomed!

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15 Comments

P7gbUk3XD710/14/2016, 11:00:50 PM7 votes

Beautiful work. I'm loving the fact that you made these icons that go along with the abilities! Would have loved to see more Lore though, but the artwork brings that backup. Very nice job.

On a side note.

"Dat Ashe"

+Support

Zerenza10/15/2016, 2:44:11 AM3 votes

The only thing i'm going to critique is her passive being basically just like kennens but with a 3 second delay between stuns. You might try finding a different passive for her since it's litterally almost exactly the same as kennens.

"Enemies hit by Kennen's abilities receive a Mark of the Storm for 6 seconds, stacking up to 3 times. At three stacks, the marks consume themselves to Stun the target for 1.25 seconds" the only difference is his can be applied as many times as he wants with diminishing effects.

So if i can make a suggestion, changing her passive to something more fitting of the name "Lost Chapter" maybe it empower's her other abilities, maybe move her ultimate to her passive somehow and then give her a different ability for her ultimate (but with the same name as it currently is) cause if we think about it, imagine she's reading her book and that's what let's her use abilities a few more times in a row with no cooldown. Just a suggestion, litterally not telling you that's what i think her passive should be just trying to help get your wheels turning.

Otherwise this is pretty amazing and great job.

Edit: No lie i love the color scheme, those are all my favorite color's, the abilities aside from the passive are really neat and unique and i'm sure she'd have a place in league of legends if her passive was different.

TPA Jason12310/15/2016, 4:19:15 AM3 votes

The work is very unique and the fact that you made all the ability and the icons for the ability and her splash art is very cool... i wish i can be talented as you but saldy riot has a lot of ideas that they have to explore before they can explore what we want for champions.

Come and Get Me10/15/2016, 12:23:12 AM2 votes

Dude wtf? This is incredible. The fact that you have a model in game and icons with a rough splash. Brilliant. Just gonna enjoy the art and effort, i'll read the abilities later :P P.S what is [OC]?

Scoroct10/15/2016, 6:57:15 PM2 votes

Really love this! The character design is fantastic as are the abilities (besides the passive which someone mentioned). In particular I love the sound of her Q and her ult. A clarification question I have is when does her shield do the damage and knock back? Does it happen upon the creation of the shield? After a set delay like Iverns? A reactivation like sions? When you hit the shield? While we know little I like the idea that she gets her powers from one of three "giants" of some kind. As a curiosity question is she from the freljord? She doesnt have to be but her color theme and clothing style seem like something from the freljord but maybe one of their more modern mages.

Arakadia10/16/2016, 6:26:03 AM2 votes

Really sick! The ult is really cool too! Her passive is the name of an item btw, idk if thats intentional. Also her passive is basically kennen's passive.