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The music was nice, and the overall presentation was good. But as for your gameplay ... Needs a lot of series work, I could list every mistake, but most of these you can learn threw time played. First, you should focus more on your creep score. The reason its imperative to have a strong cs value, or GPM( Gold Per Minute), in lower tiers, is that most players have no idea what to do. I mean it, They have no idea, do we take this dragon, We killed 3 people do we go to baron now, and to be quite frank. They have No idea how to end the game, The game will literally go on for an hour, until everyone has full build and they or you make a mistake. You should focus on pressing your advantages. KIlls in league of legends are just temporary resource denial. If you have 49 CS, and two kills. But your Lane Opponent has 80 CS. Then your Opponent has generated more gold then you, and your actually at a disadvantage for the next fight. Hence why some people don't understand how they don't continue to dominate someone, when their advantage has been gone, do to a lack of focus on CS, and Experience.

If you want to improve in your gameplay, you can allways watch professional LCS games, but I recommend studying a coach named LS, he is a professional anyalist for spoTv, and worked on the casters team at Worlds 2016.

Also, If you want to know how to jump from player to player, very quickly. F1, F2, F3, F4 and F5. (Its an decending order, So top would be first, Jungle second, Mid Third, ADC at 4th, and Support at 5th. But F1 is yourself so, So if you were playing Mid Lane. F2 is top, F3 is jungle, F4 is adc, and F5 is support. If your playing support F5 would be the ADC, and F2 would be top.

One suggestion I have for your early game, because your late and mid game seemed fairly health given, you had a couple kills by then. Focus on your Creep Score game, If you have to burn an ability to get a couple cs, that your going to miss otherwise, Then Do so. Focus on grabing as much CS as possible, and ensuring the minion wave crash's on their turret. My suggestion is to let him push the lane toward you first, Then Focus on last hitting, Meaning don't auto the minions at all., untill the auto will execute the minion, generating gold for you. Then you will notice that your minion wave will begin to grow, bigger then his new wave hitting the lane. That is when you shove the wave as fast as possible. When you've done so it makes it harder for the jungler to gank you, and it also allows you free time to poke the enemy. If he wants the turret to take no damage, he needs to tank all the minions, and burn his mana or Cool Downs.

Most of what I said is basic, and I'm sure un wanted advice, But I assure you, their are others who will come at you swifter and quicker, then me.

Sincerely, Kevin.

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