[Fiction] 48 Hour Short Story Challenge, Taric the Gem Knight

Lovely Pants·11/29/2015, 2:38:55 PM·1 votes·337 views

_(Hey friends. I'm assuming this is the best board for this thread.

Some time back I had intended to do a short story challenge for myself writing a story about each league character over the course of a day or two, but I got kind of frustrated with some of the inherent limitations of the League universe and never ended up writing more than one, figuring my time was better suited working on some other projects I wanted to do.

Nevertheless, there are always a couple of character thoughts that bounce around the old skullcase whenever I get back into league for a bit, so I intend to sort of retry the exercise. Just when I feel inspired by a particular character idea. I also had a thought that it might be fun to discuss the lore of the character with anyone interested in my reflections.

So: -If you have the interest in seeing me attempt to perform my trial, the short story will be in my first reply. Heck, if you want to try something similar or post some lore concepts of your own in the thread, feel free.

-If you have some interest in debating the elements that make the character (Taric, in this case) who they are, my reflections on that will be posted in my second reply to the thread. Probably a little later, as writing a story within whatever free time I have in 48 hours can be kind of exhausting sometimes.

-If you think whatever I have to say is dumb, you may feel free to give me that feedback as well and/or use that time to make me sad by making damn certain more threads about Yasuo flood the front page of boards.

Waffling aside, I'll update presently with a short story inspired by the now defunct backstory of Taric, the Gem Knight. Any kind of discussion at all is appreciated. )_

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Lovely Pants11/29/2015, 2:44:42 PM1 votes

(Part 1, to be continued)

Banners of arms, grand ribbons dyed with the regal blues and golds of Demacian heraldry, fluttered listlessly among rows of spearheads standing out over the hilltop. Gleaming broadswords and pikes, yet to have their steel stained with the grime of battle, lay against their owners’ shoulders. Some were already beginning to drop to the ground next to resting soldiers. The commanding officer of the battalion wore a deep scowl across his hardened, well-groomed whiskery countenance as he poured once again over a map of the surrounding geography. Minutes passed in uncomfortable silence until one of his officers standing around the overturned water drum serving as the strategy table broke the silence with her hesitant voice.

“Captain Pilkes, sir…permission to offer…”

“Yes, out with it, Sergeant,” Pilkes gruffly responded.

“Sir..”

The sturdily-built young sergeant regretted her voice choking up, showing her political inexperience in front of her fellow officers. Nevertheless, she girded her stomach and continued speaking.

“Sir, it might take us a few more days to route safe passage around the enemy encampments, but maybe we ought to listen to this knight and…”

One of the captain’s great hoary eyebrows slowly ascended as the sergeant spoke. By the time it reached its peak, the soldier rather regretted having opening her mouth at all.

Across the valley, where a lower hillock was teeming with swaths of bold red and black, the rugged commander of the Noxian troops wore a scowl identical to that on his Demacian counterpart.

“…Forget about taking Lyfhold? Are you seriously suggesting we turn tail with the enemy in our sights?”

Commander Bozson let his full, imposing figure stand wide, a spiked mailed fist opening as invitation for his second-in-command to explain his motion further. The substantially thinner man of a clearly more academic background than his commander pursed his lips, carefully considering his next choice of words.

“Turn tail? Perish the thought, commander,” the second-in-command intoned smoothly, “I only mean to suggest that this little hamlet is of minor strategic importance at best, should the terms of ceasefire with the Demacians be delayed much further. I’m sure the High Command would appreciate you _preserving _your strength for the other orders we have been tasked with…

“Spare me your rodent’s excuses.”

“Besides that, the soldiers are growing quite restless with this stalemate.”

Bozson snorted derisively, but privately recognized there was some merit to this last point. There was a saying about a Noxian with an axe to grind. He wasn’t in the habit of leaving it sharp for very long.

The reason for the stagnancy of the situation was plain for anyone to see. Smack dab between the two army camps was the village of Lyfhold. The Demacians had offered the villagers protection from Noxian encroachment on their territory. The Noxians had promised the village the generous honor of thriving under the great power of the state that was Noxus. Both offers had been declined by a stranger claiming himself to be, in his own words, an impartial party acting on behalf of the wonderful, hard-working people of Lyfhold he had just met. First by a very polite, but firm, explanation of the village’s lack of want or need for the terms offered. When that had, of course, not worked, Noxians and Demacians alike were rebuffed a fair bit more firmly by the eruption of earth and rock bodily tossing back waves of soldiers trying to traverse the narrow paths winding down into the valley. The land bore visible scars of these altercations in the form of stripes of rocky outcrops jutting out across the valley, making any organized march through the terrain exceedingly difficult.

“What news do the scouts bring of our enemies?” Commander Bozson asked at length.

“Nothing new, from what little we can see of the Demacian ranks. They are maintaining strong, rotating patrols along their side of the valley,” said his second-in-command, adding “Some of the villagers seem to be arming themselves with makeshift weaponry and keeping a sort of guard.”

“What do I care about the battle tactics of a few dozen farmers with clubs and hoes?” Bozson demanded, “What kinds of preparations is that champion of theirs making?”

The second-in-command took a deep breath, feeling the weight of his next word on his tongue.

“Tea.” (Part 1, to be continued)

Lovely Pants11/30/2015, 7:01:03 PM1 votes

Yo. Follow up post reflecting on my writing process and what I think about the character. I know there aren't many people all that interested in Taric's original lore and probably fanfiction in general on the boards, but I like the sound of my own voice enough, so it's all good.

Following the Poppy rework, I was of course interested in what the plans are going to be for the next character down the line, and I decided to make a tale of Taric my first writing exercise as a result while I thought about what a good direction for the character would be.

What are the current best/most identifiable parts of Taric's character?

In-Game - How does it feel to play Taric?

Taric's in-game character and what the league community culture views him as can basically be summed up as a gem-loving metrosexual. For most people, he's a joke character. This is not really a case where Riot originally intended him to be as comical, I think, such as the big goofy original Sion or hopefully never-changing Mundo, but Taric does hit all the right notes in appearance and dialogue to become one of the community's clowns.

The power fantasy of playing Taric is a little better though, even if his gameplay is rather simple. Taric feels like a tough protector and everything in his kit supports that fantasy. Maybe a little too well, for Riot's philosophy? He can certainly be opportunistically offensive with his early game burst, but his gameplay lends itself to more reactionary defense the majority of the time.

Lore - What is worth emphasizing?

While Taric's old lore was never extremely deep and engaging, as is the case with most of the early champions, the one thing that drew me to his character back in the day was that he was the original good-natured guy long before Braum was ever conceived. Ripped from his homeland, maybe never to return, does he get all angsty and lament his fate?

Nah, cause Taric is a bro among mother lovin' bros. He dives right into the same thing he has always ever wanted to do: Protecting the people. That's a solid core to build his character around. Braum, again, is a good character to think of as a way of making Taric different from him. Braum is kind of just an all-around, salt-of-the-earth nice guy people's person. Taric, on the other hand, seems more private and reclusive and does not share much in common with the people he protects. It's not an easy way of life, but a personal mission he has spent all of his life working towards in service of the common man.

There are a few other aspects that everyone kind of forgets about as well: -By his lore, Taric is one of the most well-educated champions represented in the game's lore -A nature oriented character, concerned with purity -comes from a different universe entirely

Writing Exercise Reflections While I'd probably ditch this narrative entirely and build from the ground up again if I were to be writing a good definitive story for Taric, what I was really trying to do was make a story based around Taric with the idea of a noble protecting the little guy. Which is why I just entirely invented all of the locations and people in the story aside from the basic conflict between a pair of Demacian and Noxian commaders. I felt like Taric would be the type of champion who saw all of the "unimportant" areas of the world suffering from the big ideological war between the great nations like Demacia and Noxus. Building up the similarities between the commanders of these two big nations, their pride and potentially oppressive nationalistic attitudes, was intentional as I feel like both nations might have a habit of stepping on the wishes of those who do not necessarily align with their own, even if Demacia is less overt about it.

Biggest regret in writing this, aside from all of the polish issues related to being concise within a time limit, is not adding enough puns about gems. Seriously. Taric's character ought to be more fabulous, even in a revised direction

Anyways, that's it from me. If you happen to be reading this and have any love for Taric or thoughts about his character, I'd love to hear them and have a brief chat. If not, I'll just be moving along until the itch to repeat this challenge when something else scratches takes hold.