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[Champion Concept] Jade the Relentless

Shockin Masters·4/25/2019, 7:58:21 PM·4 votes·2,294 views
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Jade the Relentless

Jade being as young as 16 she was considered a legend within demacia. Being known as one of demacia's most famous swordmaster's at such a young age was a feat that will live within demacia for as long as time goes on. Using nothing but a run down katana she reached the top of every bracket demacia had. She had no friends and no family that was alive that she knew of. Till one day a light appeared before her as she was traveling outside her residence. She couldn't see or put together what she was seeing but she knew it to be true. This light spoke to her and told her about her father being locked up for practicing magic arts and killing innocent demacian's. She was stuck with a stunning chill that made her show her first sign of weakness since she was born. She tried to call back to the light screaming questions and concerns but there was no response. As the time flew by her mind got more curious and more curious. She left demacia in search for clues and in search for answers. Whilst traveling outside of demacia's great walls she felt as if she was seeing a much more immersive and expansive world. She could see trees flickering with sparkles and magic, it was so beautiful to her. The ambiance of the atmosphere around her gave her hope to find a way to her father. As she wondered for months and months she never found any clues. Until, one day she discovered a wounded samurai the man was screaming cries that would haunt her for her remaining life. The samurai looked at jade star struck. "I know you... you're.... jade..." He said. Jade being as strong as she is. Knelt down beside him and nodded her head. "Its an honor... to meet you.....". He said in a rugged voice. "What happened here?" She said in a calming and yet forceful voice. "My blade... It was enchanted with arts of which that could only be compared to with the void. Its got a mind of its own. It was enchanted to help defeat darken. But the energy it produces takes over your mind. It tells you things it gives you locations of people. It controls you." He pointed towards the house adjacent from them. Something struck her at that moment only being able to think of her dad she gets up and without another word walks towards the house. Ignoring the samurais warning's she enters the house. Once inside the blade can be immediately seen almost as a neon blade. She approach's it letting fear brush off her mind and picks the blade up. After that everything immediately went white for jade. When she is awoken Everything is as if its normal. The blade is still in her grasp, the beauty in the trees are as glorious as ever and she doesn't feel weaker. After regaining her footing she walks outside to the samurai who is no longer breathing. The death of another sword wielder is nothing new to jade. She says her grace and walks away. As a day unfolds things begin getting harder for jade. She can no longer control her anger or spite. And it only gets worse from there. As she wonders outside of demacia's walls she begins to do actions she would never do. Slaughtering demacian soldiers cutting through them like flies and being able to do certain magic that would make her stronger as she kills, its almost like blood magic. This power this spite and revenge is not of her doing. After years past thousands of soldiers being killed and all the agony and suffering she is caused there is still a gleam of what used to be jade fighting the blade and occasionally comes out winning the battle. You can hear her voice sprinkle out in an aether like tone.

Alright thats the long part now to abilities i came up with. Im not going to go into detail on hp attack etc because if this was to ever become a thing it would riots choice in the matter.

P- One last kiss

After killing an enemy. Jades blade gains a stack of Control (4 on champion kill). After 12 stacks have been collected Jade Will succumb over the blade releasing the blades full potential. Increasing Her critical strike chance by 100%. Jades critical strike damage is lowered to 160% and scales to 200% at level 18. Critical strike chance adds true damage to her autos however it does not increase critical strike chance. 20% crit = 20 true damage.

This effect lasts 6 seconds and refreshes on champion kill.

Cool-down ~ 30 seconds

Q - Hell's presence

Jade summons 7 blades that spin around her dealing damage to anything she touches. casting Swords fury on an enemy will cause the swords to follow that target inside causing damage to anyone around the target.

w- Quickstep

Jade activates a movement speed buff that allows her to dodge all incoming projectiles for a brief moment.

E- Sword's fury Jade swipes her blade twice in a repeated fashion stunning the next target for 1 second and granting 2 stacks of control.

R- Ambience Allows jade to mark a target. Giving her the ability to recast Ambience with a 1 second buffer and teleport behind the marked victom (Tf ult limit). Upon recast the marked champion will be blinded for 2 seconds (Vision blinded not no auto attack blindness) If the champion is suffering from Hell's presence then the swords instead explode dealing a massive amount of physical damage to the target and all those around them.

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Thank you for reading this. Have a great time.

10 Comments

nasu0104/25/2019, 8:48:28 PM1 votes

hmm potential, theres are some aspects that have already been one but this is not a bad concept however you need to redo the formatting.

nguforever4/25/2019, 10:37:38 PM1 votes

Very interesting design choice and I can see you put the effort in trying to breathe life into her. I'll try to keep my thoughts as concise as possible in order to give you viable criticism.

In terms of the lore I feel like there is much more that could be expanded upon. For example, if she has a katana, is she from Ionia originally? If not, how did she come across her original sword? As for the Void made sword, the art doesn't exactly convey that it is void made or void enchanted. Perhaps a better explanation would be dark Targonian magic or even blood magic rituals that were performed in the Forrests where Zyra now lives. Overall, however, I feel like this is a good character that simply needs a little more background.

In terms of the kit I think I have an understanding of what you were going for. You have an AD champion that wields a blade and focuses on critical/true damage and AOE damage. The disengage of course would be her Quickstep which functions as her dodge. Then of course she can teleport presumably into a team fight and deal massive AOE damage and clean-up anyone that that isn't killed from her all in. Her passive converts her critical damage into true damage and this is well and fine.

However, I don't think the first part of her passive will be viable. Unless she cannot lose stacks, it would force her to quickly kill three enemies at once, kill two enemies after stunning both of them, or stun an enemy six times. While this is certainly feasible, you wouldn't be able to use it in the laning phase. And if the stacks do not wear off, then you only get 6 seconds of 100% crit until you have your passive down for a certain amount of time. I would change it to where every stack counts as 1 second and give her Q the ability to stack as well.

Additionally, for her W I feel it's just a weaker version of Jax's E. One thing that could make it interesting would be utilizing the Control part of her kit. You could say that although it has a fixed cooldown, Jade can expend Control stacks to dodge again instantly. That way it gives her more dodging ability while at the same time giving her the cost-risk of expending her ability to have more critical damage.

Overall great work and continue coming up with cool designs.

Mr Voidling4/26/2019, 9:33:54 PM1 votes

The Lore layout can DEFINITELY be improved upon, a huge chunk of text is very daunting and often times disorientating while reading.

I recommend using spacer lines - 3 *'s (asterisks) on their own line of text - between the lore and abilities.

Like this line above ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Dividing the lore into paragraphs, to ease the reading of it.

And if you want then you can put the description of her abilities into boxes like this one using a ">" at the start of your text line.

Either that or use more spacer lines, up to you really.

This will make your display better, and the post will feel more appealing.

Also Nearsighted is what you're thinking of for the ultimate, rather than blind. Same effect as Graves and Quinn.