League Story Number 4: Shyvana Ch.1

Bergentrueckung·2/6/2017, 2:27:58 PM·6 votes·568 views
The Survivor's Flame.pdf

So ever since I decided to start writing these stories in shorter chapters, I've been more productive! Though to be fair I started this one a little bit previously so I'm still not that productive (XD). I've also decided to expand the types of champions I write about (i.e not Noxians, although I find them the most compelling). Thanks in advance for reading this and I hope you enjoy my stories! If you have a critiscm or thought, good or bad, please leave a comment as it helps me get better.

-Bergentrueckung Shyvana

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P.S. Links to previous stories

Cheers!

11 Comments

Chembaron Yamada2/6/2017, 10:56:07 PM2 votes

"League Story Number 4" and it is not about Jhin.... you monster.....

PapaGreg212/6/2017, 9:38:16 PM1 votes

Your story was extremely well written. It shows that you have writing experience. I perform a good amount of editing every week and I was surprised to find how little there was to critique.

TyrekGoldenspear2/6/2017, 9:58:02 PM1 votes

Wow, this was really good! Reads really fluidly and you're really descriptive in your writing.