A Champion Concept: Hallira, the Lost Star

Inside the link on Google Docs I wrote up abilities and a short bio as well as placeholder stats, as I'm not a game designer. EDIT: I allowed comments on the document, please be at the least not rude or crass or they will be deleted.

I came up with this a while ago and couldn't stop thinking about it one night, so I started writing it up. I've started developing Hallira over the past while, and thought that I may as well present them here. First and foremost, please don't flip out about the numbers or ratios that are shown -- I'm ballparking and not really counting on any of them showing up this way. Second, I would prefer helpful, constructive criticism instead of complaining that the Bronze II player is thinking of making a Support.

Hallira's story and bio is pretty basic because I wasn't entirely sure what direction I wanted to go in, and didn't want to go into detail at the moment since trying to make up a reason as to why a Star in the League universe became sentient is difficult. Besides that, I hoped mainly to make a Support mage that could use an ability to trade of damage for healing, or healing for damage. The dual ult I felt was mainly there for an extra use for her E so she is useful besides for escaping a fight or fighter characters.

Thank you for reading.