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Polquix, The grand alchemist

ApothecaryK·7/10/2017, 4:38:08 PM·1 votes·513 views

Lore: Polquix was a mysterious alchemist that lives in the far east. He was known for his alchemical prowess and destructive concoctions. He was eventually hired by noxus and put under an enhancement program for 7 years. When Polquix was done with the program, he had become an alchemist greater than all of history's greatest with slight side-effects of insanity. He has also become extremely carefull in his alchemy. This is speculated being due to an unfortunate accident during the program.

Base (lvl 1) stats: HP: 550 Mana:220 AD: 40

Passive: Precise Alchemy: Casting a basic ability refreshes the CD of another of his abilities but puts the other on CD. Trying to cast an ability that is on CD will automatically put all your basic abilities on CD.

Q: Alchemical Lightning (scales with AP)(20 mana)(8s CD): Deal (30/45/60/75/90) damage to a target and slow them by 95% for 1/1.25/1.5/1.75.2 seconds. This effect spreads to all nearby enemies.

W: Flaming vial (scales with AP)(20 mana)(8s CD): Cast a circle of flame that deals (40/60/80/100/120) per second to all enemies. If you step in it you gain 50/60/70/80/90 % increased movement speed. Circle lasts 3s

E: Putrid Explosion (scales with AP)(20 mana)(8s cd): Blast off in a direction ( 2x flash range) leaving a cloud of toxic gas at the location you left. That gas spreads out In a ring dealing less damage the further it travels. From (150/200/250/300/350) damage at initial point to (15/20/25/30/35) at max range.

R: Controlled alchemical disaster (Scales with AP)(150 mana)(150s CD): Put all your basic abilities on CD. Create a (3x size) putrid explosion that applies alchemical lightning to all enemies hit. Once the ring reaches max radius, cast a grand flaming vial to cover the entire area for 6 seconds.

3 Comments

A Fizzition7/10/2017, 8:08:41 PM1 votes

Firstly, you're missing most of the base statistics (hp regen, mana regen, hp and mana gained per lvl, etc). These are vital to making sure a champion is playable, unplayable, or just badly designed. Secondly, you say that all of the abilities scale with AP, but how much? Thirdly, what is he supposed to be? You don't seem to have provided any range information, so I can only assume that Polquix is a tanky-ability power top/mid laner who has a standard melee range. Fourth, I think that he would get absolutely slaughtered in the laning phase, due to the fact that his main poke tool in lane (Alchemical Lightning) has quite a decent sized cooldown for a 30/45/60/75/90 damage ability. Fifth, you're completely MISSING the range on your Q, W, and E abilities.

Overall, I'd say that this champion has potential, but need quite an amount of remaking to make him more reviewable. The passive has a very high skill cap, the idea of using all your basic abilities as your ultimate seems to have potential aswell, etc. I like the idea, but it needs detail.

Thanks for reading, -A Fizzition.