A Different Breeze

This is my first story that I'm writing in this blog, so I would like if u guys give me comments on how to improve. Thanks. Chapter 1: A different breeze Riven was running through the ominous noxian streets, in attempt to loose her pursuer. It was a rainy night and she had been running for about ten minutes now. She ran around a corner and faced a dead end"Dam!" She told herself. As she stood there she noticed the figure chasing her stop and slowly advance towards her. She turned around to face the enemy with sword drawn and ready to fight. 'I need a distraction anything' she thought n her mind. /Flash back/: A week earlier Rven noticed a figure stalking her but couldn't figure out who it was. At first she though it's normal since in noxus everyone was an assassin or stalker of some sort. But after about 4 days she noticed the person coming closer into her comfort zone day by day. It was today, while in an inn that she noticed the person unsheathing a weapon under the cloak the person wore. She then quickly hurried out and started to run. Now she was trapped in a dead end and the pursuer was about 20 yards away. Riven observed her surrounding and saw a gap in the wall that led into a warehouse. The pursuer slowly advanced towards Riven, placing each foot with care and dignity into the muddy ground. 10 yards away, she needed a distraction, and fast! Suddenly, as hearing her plea, an explosion, on a block down the road. As the explosion appeared, the sky filled itself with black smoke and the horizon with the red flames of fate. Riven seazed the oportunity to wring herself through the gap in the wall. She barely made it when she heard another explosion that set her off balance for a moment. After regained jg her footing she continued to creep through this old warehouse. In the meantime the figure was eaqually surprised by the sudden explosion , and only too late did the person realize that hill it's target has escaped. He muttered a silent curse under his lips. But as he finished, he saw two figures running towards him,The two figures were Twich and Ziggs.