Character Creation (Feedback Needed!!!!!)

Hey everyone! I've got quite a long ways to go (i will get everything finalized and uploaded before the deadline) but im looking to apply to riots summer art internship. Im working on my website and what not for the application submission and would love some feedback. I'm not in school for character design specifically so i'm kind of learning as I go (which is the main reason I would love to intern at riot, to be taught!!!). SO yeah if you have ideas, or feedback or really any constructive i'd love to hear it! :D*[slayer-pantheon-popcorn]*