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Tsuren, The Scale of Embers (Champion Concept Draft)

KingGandroff·7/2/2017, 9:16:18 PM·1 votes·326 views

Role: Top lane fighter

Passive: Blades of Ember

Every 3 minutes Tsuren can have the chance to swap his weapon or keep it.

Dusk Blade: Cannot Crit, attack speed down, but applies a bleed that scales decently with AD

Dawn Blade: Crit chance up, lower attack

Q Ability: Angelborne Suspension

Tsuren throws out his current blade to a target location, dealing damage to units along the way and forcing him to wield the other blade. It will then be suspended at the location. Tsuren will get massively increased movement speed when approaching the blade, that goes away when he is in close proximity to it. Upon touching it, he will dual-wield the weapons for a brief time, giving him a lower crit chance boost and a lower bleed. If Tsuren casts this ability again, the first one will return to Tsuren. If he casts it in the same area as his other one however, it will damage units around it, but Tsuren will be unable to auto attack until the ability comes off cooldown,

W Ability: Radiant Will

Tsuren charges his blade with positive and negative energy, giving him a shield. Attacks with the Dawn Blade will make 10% of the shield an attack damage shield, and attacks with the Dusk blade will make 10% of it magic damage. When dual wielding, he will charge the shield with a white color, 10% at a time. Once it's full, if his shield is broken, he will get an extremely brief time of invulnerability.

E Ability: Heavenly Surge

Tsuren Dashes a short distance, and after a brief delay, he will dash to the nearest unit. (Prioritization: Killing Blows>Champs>Other) If a sword is nearby, he will instead blink to the sword upon casting and then blink to the unit instead. If there are no units nearby, the ability will be cancelled

R Ability: Earthly Descention

Upon casting, golden floating clones of Tsuren will appear next to all enemy champions and himself. They will stay there for the next 5 seconds, and he can choose one to appear from. Once he has made his choice, all the clones will explode and he will come out of the one he selected. If he does not pick one, it will default to the one in his initial position.

In terms of appearance, he has a long flowing robe with white and black clouds on it, and grey hair

2 Comments

Omnem Occido7/2/2017, 11:57:33 PM1 votes

Lore-wise, he sounds like he belongs to the same race as Kayle and Morgana.

As for the abilities, his Passive and Q sound really cool. His W is a bit disjointed from the rest, though: it just doesn't seem to fit his style. He already has a ranged ability, and the wisp seems like an unnecessary add on to his kit.

He seems to be a melee carry like Yasuo, with good mobility. He needs a survival option, like how Yas has his passive and W, or how Yi has his W. Maybe a shield that is refreshed by attacking enemies x amount of times, with the active being a cleanse. That way he is rewarded for fighting, and has an option to get out of a bad situation.

As for his Ult, I like it a lot, but 5 seconds of untargetability is crazy long. Like, half to all of a fight long. Perhaps have it be a dual activation: first, he creates the golden clones, then, he recasts and targets an enemy, becoming untargetable for a second or two, and appearing next to the target, dealing damage just to that target. The clones will remain until he reappears.