League of Legends Novel: The Battle Mistress (Sivir)

Hi there, the three people who will actually see this! I've decided to work on a League of Legends novel based on the character Sivir. Why did I choose Sivir? Well, she was the first champion I ever mained, the first champion I ever got to mastery level 5, and I think she has an interesting lore. This novel will cover her whole lore, but more detailed, and I'm going to add my own characters, missions, etc. For example, the lore states she roamed with a mercenary band for a couple years, but never said what Sivir did. Well, I'm going to create some of my own scenarios for what the mercenary band encountered.

I hope you guys enjoy the novel, as I am typing this, only the first chapter has been posted so far. However, I will be posting a chapter whenever I finish it, and I welcome any sort of comments on how I can improve my writing.

Enjoy, and thank you to the people who took the time to read the first chapter (or more chapters if you're seeing this later). While I am looking for all types of criticism, I will take a moment to say, please do not be rude about it. I know some people like to only point out the negative and then don't say how to improve, so if you are willing to help me out and give me some tips, please give me some tips instead of pointing out my errors.

Note: While most stuff on this website is meant for 18+, I couldn't find another website to post this so when you read this, just don't click on anything else.

Note number 2: I do include graphic depictions of violence, and it's meant to be 13+ because I couldn't think of how else to depict the harsh desert life which is full of thievery, murders, etc.