The Mischievous Adventures part 384

Silverninj28·Aug 12, 2018·2 votes·1,800 views

(Later)

Businessman 1: "So is this the place?" Businessman 2: "Yep, and today's the day we finally get this place." Businessman 3: "Good, that old man is annoying." : "Hey! Stop!" Businessman 3: "And you are?" : "I'm Tristana, and I'm going to stand up for Mr. Kled and his land." Businessmen 1,2, and 3: "......." Businessman 2: "Cute, now steep aside little girl." : "No!" Businessman 2: "Steep aside or we'll use force." : "I said no." Businessman 3: "This is getting ridiculous, Mr. Kled may you please remove this girl." Businessman 1: "Why are you shouting? We don't even know if he's here." Businessman 3: "Oh he's here alright." Storms into the house : "Wait, no!" Goes after the Lawyer Businessman 3: "Huh? Completely empty." : "He left?" Businessman 2: "Well that's just perfect, more work for us." Businessman 1: "Calm down, maybe he'll come back." : "...Wait, Mr. Kled!" Businessman 3: "He is here, knew it!" Businessman 2: "And he's asleep, perfect." : "Mr. Kled wake up, the lawyer guys are here....Mr. Kled? C'mon you can't be that much of a heavy sleeper....M-Mr. Kled?...Please, please don't be..." Checks his pulse "....." Tears up Businessman 1: "What? What's wrong?" : "H-He's...H-He's...." Businessman 1: "...He's gone isn't he?" : Nods Businessman 1: "Alright, come here." Hugs her Businessman 2: "Wow...he must have died in his sleep." Businessman 3: "And I don't see any pills or self wounds...I guess it was his time." : "......" Lawyer 2: "...Hey, I see a note next to him. It says...to Tristana." : Grabs note Note (): 'Dear Tristana, if you're reading this here note then I'm...sorry to say but, I'm gone. Funny thing is I think I saw old death near the fences, that or it was me hallucinating. Any who, I'm sorry I didn't get to see you one last time kid. You were honestly good company, and dare I say...friend. Now I also got a surprise for y'ah, guess what? I went to your girl scout place and for the first time in years, gave up my land under your name. Now I hope you take good care of it, cause if not I'm going to haunt ya for the rest of your life!!!! Hehe, anyway I may have not have seen you but at least I said good-bye. Those biscuits were so darn good, yer a good shot, and be sure to protect my land. As for me, my wife, and Skaarl are going to root for yah kid!!' Businessman 2: "So he...gave up his land...to her?" Businessman 1: "Guess so, and that means we'll have to wait awhile." Businessman 3: "Wow, even in death the crazy bastard finds a way to screw us." : "Mr. Kled...Ok, I'm going to protect your land. I promise."

12 Comments

ArakadiaAug 12, 20181 votes

That doesn't sound very much like Kled's character.

IfnethAug 12, 20181 votes

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That doesn't sound very much like Kled's character.

This is a different world. Malzahar and Kai’Sa are Kassadin’s children. Kayn is dating Jinx. Ivern owns a theater.

ArakadiaAug 12, 20181 votes

Whats the point in using Kled's character for this fanfic if its nothing like Kled?

IfnethAug 13, 20181 votes

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Whats the point in using Kled's character for this fanfic if its nothing like Kled?

Kled dies, though, and Tristana has been his only friend. Also note that Kled wants to ensure that his property doesn’t get taken by the businessmen (this story’s version of Kled’s motivation) and that he therefore denies them by leaving the land to Tristana. She will take on his role, now. The land will be safe.

ArakadiaAug 13, 20181 votes

Your just telling me the story.

That didn't answer the question.

IfnethAug 13, 20181 votes

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Your just telling me the story.

That didn't answer the question.

That does answer the question. Kled in Runeterra sees the whole world as his property and wants to drive everyone off it; Kled in The Mischievous Adventures has a tract of land as his property and wants to keep investors off it. That change of character is a conversion between stories.

Since this Kled is scaled-down in ambition, his nastiness can be scaled-down, too. He can befriend Tristana. Once again, we see a conversion. However this Kled also dies. That event can’t be converted, since Kled is flat-out alive in Runeterra. Instead, the author thought of a work-around. Kled, foreseeing his demise and nonetheless determined to at least keep the investors off, bequeaths the land to Tristana, who will continue his efforts.

What part of this confuses you?

ArakadiaAug 13, 20181 votes

What confuses me is why the author bothers using League's characters only to change them so drastically. So many of the changes in character make no sense. Tristana spending the rest of her life to protect a Kled who lost ALL OF HIS personality. Kayn's entire ambitious desire (key to him) is thrown out the window so he can date Jinx who would get bored of him and is literally insane (another key character component thrown out).

There is criticism on the story telling but my biggest misunderstanding is why the characters have been warped beyond recognition.

Silverninj28Aug 13, 20181 votes

Ifneth please don't defend me, I'm just going say this. Arakadia, you're right I discriminated the characters. What I thought was just using them as shells for different personalizes then there counter parts, or like you said a fanfiction. I have every right to be berated and bashed, there is no need for an argument. I am a terrible writer that has no dignity. Thank you and have a nice day.

IfnethAug 13, 20181 votes

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Ifneth please don't defend me, I'm just going say this. Arakadia, you're right I discriminated the characters. What I thought was just using them as shells for different personalizes then there counter parts, or like you said a fanfiction. I have every right to be berated and bashed, there is no need for an argument. I am a terrible writer that has no dignity. Thank you and have a nice day.

No, Silverninja. Stop putting yourself down. You are not a terrible writer. You don’t deserve to be berated and bashed. You have dignity. I can’t stand hearing you talk about yourself like this! :(

Your story is wonderful, and your characterization makes sense, since this is not Runeterra. The characters can have their own motivations.

ArakadiaAug 14, 20181 votes

I'm not saying the story is bad, my question was about why use Runeterra's characters if this isn't Runeterra and the characters are so drastically different.

Silverninja shouldn't put him/herself down. I wasn't offering specific constructive criticism as I wanted to understand the motive and purpose of Silverninja's fanfic.

ArakadiaAug 14, 20181 votes

I apologize if I was berating or bashing you. Your clearly a passionate and consistent poster on this board.

I don't understand why you think your a terrible writer, I never said that. Riot tier lore can be criticized as well, nothing has to be flawless.

IfnethAug 12, 20181 votes

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