Huzzy Games Montage [Feed back wanted]

So I made this video. I was going to try and learn the editing software I use. This is one of my favourite YouTubers. He is a Dignitas streamer. Also I need to work on how to make better thumb nails >.< Just wanted to hear some feed back!

The next video I am working on right now is a Bjregsen Urf Montage.