My first video ! Feedback wanted, both positive and negative ! ! ! ! !

Ok so this is my first video edit, I know i really suck but i welcome any feedback from you people, good or bad. I mean there must be some vetereans of editing aongs you so i would really apreciate a tip or trick that i may be able to use for my next video (i am counting on getting a new PC some time so the lags/fps and so on will be a lot smoother). Anyway, i hope you enjoy the play .