Honnestly, is that so bad (youtube video)

Hi guys, i recently tried to make a youtube montage about some of my clips i recorded the 2014 season. After a moment, i wanted to know ppl opinon, so i registered to reddit 0_0 and then BOOM ! according to reddit, im a shit haha. I just want to know more people opinion about the positive/negative factors of this video in a way to improve myself.

I am a silver 2 division player