Worked hard on this, hope you guys like it.
This took me a while to make, had fun making it though hope you'll have fun watching it :)
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Link : https://youtu.be/baqT5YoxeMs
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my mouth hurts , I laughed so hard gj man [sg-miss-fortune]
Damn, that editing really was next level...
I like your style. Editing really gave me a good guffaw.
nice job man i loved it. i wish u would of done a littel better on the script it doesnt feel quite smooth. but all and all good video and keep at it*[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]*
Well done my good sir, well done indeed. You get a nice upwards arrow +1
Your drastic sarcastic attack...
You reming me "MagicarpUsedFly" "Yakkocmn" "TheRandomYordle" "Schooch" and such type of guys. People like these kind of videos, if you'll keep doing, one day you'll achieve a succesfull success :P
Was good, but i feel some parts are just dragged on for too long, the galio part for example.
Quality vids on your channel Subscribed. Keep em comin.
Overall not bad, but the authenticity of delivery on some parts were lacking, most notably 3:31-3:48. It came off like you were trying to sound angry but you sounded like you were trying to hold back on the volume level. If you've got parents/roommates you were holding back for, I'd suggest recording those lines while they're not home so you don't hold back like that, it detracts from the video a bit. The parts where you didn't have to be as loud to sell what you were going for came off far better than the parts where you did for this reason. The rest, like I said, wasn't bad. It could use a bit of refinement, but that's something that'll come with a bit more experience as you just do the videos more.
As a comparison on what I meant, to help clarify my point, you really sell the frustration and "i give up" part of the Ziggs/Singed game, because it wasn't necessary to be loud to sound defeated, so that part was far better than the aforementioned segment where being louder would have sold it better.
That's just my two cents though, good luck on your videos, and I hope my criticism helps a little.
No lie, this is pretty amazing XD I loved the asian fight scene XD