Thresh complication

What do you guys think of my montage? Some are normall things some special What did I do good and what did I do wrong? And any advice for the next time? (Srry for my bad english)

UseMyLanternPls(4444tom) http://youtu.be/7Df5N5r7Q4Y (I put the link here idk why but I cant put it in the link box)