the swain we needed but not given
pass : gain hp OR mana depending on which is lower based on 3-20% dmg dealt.
we needed his Q to have interaction w/ his other abilities other than just more dmg, (like syndra and brand do) adding a blind and silence would have made landing his W feel much more impactful (animation Beatrice goes to targets in area and pecks them )
it is was easier to lead w/ his W but he would miss out on the bonus dmg from E and its long range made it hard to get to target before they escape, the range should have been reduced to 700 but radius increased to 325 an added "when snare enemy champion gain movement speed" which would have allowed him to choose to continue in or leave.
increase E range to 700 make it an aoe burst radius 325 add "WHILE marked dmg to swain is reduced by 20%, and if target DIES furture dmg is increased by 5%,& if target kills swain their future dmg to swain is reduced by 5%" an it gets quotes, kill: "this time was easy enough, next time will be even easier", died "you won this battle, but you will lose the war." (Q interact Beatrice does 2X dmg as beam animation )
his R needed when hit send out another raven at attacker(increase mana cost/for current mana cost) to counter that he can only send one every other second
his Q,E need 7sec cd since they act over 4 seconds