Critique my Gameplay?

Hi, I am recently learning ADC and I was wondering if anybody has the time to watch this 30 min video (I know many don't so to those who do thank you!) Please give me some tips?

Any laning tips or teamfighting tips/objective tips that I can keep in mind next time I play ADC will be helpful :). Even video editing tips would be helpful!

Thank you to anyone who watches this !