A mini creation

she came up to the pier. No one was around. She looked at the waves. their cascade hypnotizing. As if the ocean welcomed her. She dove in. Mind melding with the wave. The monotone comforting. Stillness,a breath. Peace.

--hours--

Watching her. Hair blowing in the wind. The tide coming in. sun setting a tap on the shoulder. The look incomprehensible. a question

how are you?)( Fine.

{really} genuine concern stale answers encrypted undertones underlying problems polite protocol annoyance

..really... unending pursuit loss of focus obligated question false pretenses routine response annoyance

He sat next to her. Spoke of the hidden. Said things from the heart. Things he would never say. Clouds came in. Sirens blared. The sky rattled. swiftly, pouring, Danger.

Did you like this short? should i do more? Did you like the ending? Was it too short? what did you hate about it/ DId you understand what was going on? any questions about it I'll answer, not right now tho sleep time.