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[Champion Concept] Fae, The Runaway Robot

BrainSvck·3/30/2014, 1:34:25 AM·5 votes·1,141 views

Fae: The Runaway Robot

First Edit

Ranged / Primary: Mage / Secondary: Tank

Attack Power: 5 / Defense Power: 8 / Magic Power: 9 / Difficulty: 8

Note: Mana items do not affect Fae

Note: Fae uses battery instead of mana, like the energy concept for Zed & other champions

Stats

Health: 445 (+95 per level)

Health Regen: 10*/5 sec* (+1 per level)

Battery Power: 1000 (+0 per level)

Battery Power Regen: 5*/5 sec* (+0 per level)

Attack Damage: 59 (+4 per level)

Ability Power: 0 (+0)

Attack Speed: 0.53 (+1.6% per level)

Armor: 16 (+2.5 per level)

Magic Resist: 34 (+3 per level)

Range: 550 (Ranged)

Movement Speed: 330

Abilities

Passive: Power Charge

While any one of her abilites are on cooldown, Fae's movement speed decreases by 5 each second, down to a minimum of 340, until she stops movement, after standing still for 3 seconds, her movement speed increases to a cap of 525 which decays over 5 seconds, down to her normal movement speed, after movement. While she is standing still, her cooldowns are reduced by an extra 50% per second. If she kills or assists in killing an enemy champion, her passive is refreshed, removing the movement speed debuff and adding the battery charge and cooldown buffs until she attacks an enemy.

Q: Short Circuit

Fae emits massive amounts of electricity dealing 40/60/80/100/120 (+80% AP) damage to enemies within 450 range of her.

Battery Cost: 55/60/65/70/75

Cooldown: 20/18/16/14/12

W: Plasma Bolt

Fae fires out an electrically charged skillshot, dealing 60/80/100/120/140/160 (+85% AP) damage to the first enemy it hits. (Does not add Fae's passive)

Battery Cost: 30/35/40/45/50

Cooldown: 24/22/20/18/16

E: Steel Plating

Passive: Every time Fae blocks an enemy ability, she gains a stack of Steel Plating. Each stack adds 2 Armor & Magic Resist to her active buff. There Is no limit on the amount of stacks that Fae can hold and she loses 1 stack upon death.

Active: Fae gains ** 5 (+Stacks)** armor and magic resist for 4 seconds and blocks the next ability that hits her in the next 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2 second(s). If Fae blocks an ability with Steel Plating, her Armor & Magic Resist buff is refreshed and she gains a stack of Steel Plating.

Battery Cost: 30/35/45/60/65

Cooldown: 28/26/24/22/20

R (Ult): Plasma Charge

Fae's next 5 basic attacks cause her target to, instead of her attack damage, take 100/125/150 *(+50% AP) damage over 5 seconds and are slowed by 40% for 2 seconds.

Battery Cost: 100/175/200

Cooldown: 250/225/200

Lore

Fae is a robot that was found near Piltover after she was shot from the sky and sustained massive amounts of damage. She was rebuilt by one of Piltover's finest technamurges, Heimerdinger, who repaired her body and replaced her internal wiring, he also disabled her weapons and redesigned her into a workbot. She was brought back to life and was given the task of helping him with his studies and inventions in his University. She absorbed massive amounts of knowledge, nearly anything that she heard or read while she worked in his lab. She had no name and decided to give one to herself and settled on Fae. She did not like her job in the lab and wanted to start a project of her own, she began to construct a weapon for use by Piltover's police force as protection. When her invention was found and destroyed because of it's potential to hurt the citizens, she decided to run away and create her own lab. She collected her destroyed prototype and ran away from her home in the lab. Heimerdinger and the police force followed her and attempted to catch her due to her dangerous potential, she came to the League of Legends to find help in protecting herself and her invention from them. She repaired her weapons and made a pact with the summoners, "I will allow you to control me in battle, but in return, you must protect me from them."

"All I ever wanted to do was protect my friends, why do they think so bad of me?" - Fae

Dialog & PBE Interactions

Upon Selection:

Ready for battle.

Attacking:

I will not go back.

Don't get in my way.

I will destroy you.

You will feel my pain.

I fight for my freedom.

Attacking.

Movement:

As you wish.

Do not forget your promise.

If I must.

I will show them my strength.

Show me the way to freedom.

Joke

That was fun, let's do it again sometime. -twirls around with her arms out-

I am stronger than I look! -Flexes right arm- erm, just imagine muscles.

Joking Near Enemy Heimerdinger

Did you miss me?

I wouldn't touch the Tridyminiumobulator if I were you, it might... erm- nevermind

Joking Near Enemy Caitlyn or Vi

What are you doing all the way over there?

Let's play a little game of tag, you start.

Joking Near Enemy Jayce

Hey, hero. What are you doing here?

Taunt

You can't possibly hurt me.

Ow, that hurt soooooo much.

They already tried to destroy me, do you think you can do better?

Taunting Near Enemy Heimerdinger

You are not my father, or even my friend.

Taunting Near Enemy Caitlyn

What makes you think you can kill me this time?

YOU catch ME? hahahahaha that's very funny.

Taunting Near Enemy Vi

How about a repeat of last time?

Is poor, little Vi getting tired?

Taunting Near Enemy Jayce

You may be a hero in Piltover, but out here, you're just another obstacle.

Using Short Circuit

Fae screams and crackles.

Using Plasma Bolt

Watch out! Oops too late.

Take this!

Using Steel Plating

I become even stronger.

Impenetrable.

Using Plasma Charge

Nobody may survive.

Can you handle the power.

Using Recall

-Spins around slowly, humming a song

Friends Orianna Blitzcrank

Rivals Vi Heimerdinger Caitlyn Jayce

This is my second, and favourite, champion that I have created and am definitely open to suggestions and questions for improvements. I will be updating her a lot and would love to see new ideas from you guys. Fae was actually based off of a computer from a podcast that I am in love with, called Welcome To Night Vale (episode [42?]: Numbers). She has a look that is similar to iBlitzcrank with a female body shape.

I will add concept art when I get home and have my drawing tablet + a little bit of time.

** All Feedback is appreciated. **

Also, if you like it, please upvote so other people can see it.

23 Comments

CaptainWednesday3/30/2014, 10:38:32 PM2 votes

I like robots! But prepare yourself, because I'm about to tear her apart...

  • Her name is not exactly robotic sounding...

  • The Battery resource is a nice touch. Although, with her high costs, you may want to increase her base Battery Regeneration.

  • Her starting HP is far too high, her starting health regeneration is too low (regeneration is based upon a number / 5, ex. Garen's base HP regeneration is 7/5 = 1.4 HP per second - Fae's would be 2/5 = 0.4 health per second), her base attack damage is too high (56.3 is the highest base), a champion should never and has never started with Ability Power or have scaling AP, her base Attack Speed is far too low (attack speed scaling should be shown in a percentage form as well), she starts with way too much armor (an average for a tank is around 13-16 starting armor), her armor scaling is too low for a tank (try 3.5), her magic resistance is far too high (should be around 30 starting Magic Resistance for a tank), the MR scaling is a bit too high (should be around 1.25). She has no movement speed. There are serious flaws with her stats that you should consider revising. Try comparing her to other tanks before deciding on her stats.

  • Her passive: when you say "her abilities", does that mean all of them or just one? Assuming we disregard that part, whenever she stands still she gains a faster cooldown and regeneration on Battery? I can see that, maybe a little much but still. Getting a movement speed buff after doing this? Sounds good. It should read like this:
    "While any of Fae's abilities are on cooldown, she may enter Power Charge. Power Charge activates if Fae stands still for three seconds and is out of combat. While Power Charge is active, Fae regenerates Battery 100% faster and refreshes abilities on cooldown 25% faster. If Fae refreshes at least one cooldown, she gains 500 movement speed that rapidly decays over five seconds. If Fae enters combat or moves, Power Charge is disabled for 60 seconds." That seems a little realistic.

  • The Q... It has next to no damage. Bump up the base, remove the awkward scaling, and lower the cooldown. It would be cool she stored charges of it. Similar to Akali R or Heimerdinger turrets? Also, whats with the odd Battery cost reduction? 10 off then 5 the next levels? May want to fix that.

  • The W... Again, zero damage. Even tanks need some sort of damage. Bump up the base damage and AP scaling. Also explain the AP scaling on the stun duration? If I'm correct, the AP adds time to the stun? If that's the case, if Fae has a small 100 AP, she will stun someone for 7.5 seconds at max rank. Do you see an issue with that? I do.

  • The E... This is where our tank comes in! Although, there are some very flawed things here. The scaling is fine until it goes from 25->40. I think it should 25->30. The AP scaling is again really OP here. 100 AP grants her 65 bonus Armor and Magic Resistance. Crazy broken. I like the idea that its a spell shield. Similar to Morgana. I suggest lowering the duration of it though. Most spell shields only last for 2 seconds or so. Also, the cooldown scaling is all off. It needs to be uniform. Not 2 seconds off, to 3 seconds off, to 5 seconds off. It makes no sense. Same with the odd jump in cost with the Battery.

  • The R... It's honestly too similar to Voilbear's ultimate. He does the same thing, just with a max of 4 targets hit and with a duration rather than capped number of AA's. You should give her something that relates to her battery. Maybe something like this:
    Plasma Charge - "After channeling for one second, Fae releases pulses of energy from her battery, dealing 100/150/200 (60% AP) each second for four seconds to enemy units within an 800 range of Fae. If an enemy champion is hit with all four pulses, they are slowed for 50% for three seconds and Fae is refunded 20% of the Battery cost." Maybe that'l work? I don't know its up to you. Just don't make her seem like other champions. Give her an identity. Also, the cooldown is too high.

  • Continued below...

Hoffmisc3/30/2014, 6:59:36 PM1 votes

I like this. I like this a lot. :)
I would suggest lowering the ap ratio on her ult though.

Rubitonabuilding3/30/2014, 7:35:17 PM1 votes

I like the concept, robots are awesome. But I'm not big on the name. Fae doesn't seem like a robot's name IMHO.

MiyokoShadow3/31/2014, 2:17:33 AM1 votes

I like this idea a lot. The lore is neat, and Fae sounds like she would be a companion to Orianna. If Fae was an actual champ, I would buy her. NJ

Khavixdabaddie4/1/2014, 4:37:05 AM1 votes

Honestly I think adding a bit of background with Fae and Orianna would be amazing. Maybe even a joke or taunt while near (different for enemy/allied teams)